What’s wrong in this seemingly good webpage?
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Well the answer is
1) There are 2 headlines that clash with each other and so no singular focus
2) The headline has too many conjunctions. It is hard to understand.

How to correct it?
1) Remove the headline section “what is kick off labs?” (It is there in every page and is totally unnecessary)
2) Change the second headline as given below

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